This hooked me from the beginning and didn’t let go! The narration is really strong, and the dialogue and interactions between the two friends are perfect. I hope you come back to this someday because it feels like the beginning of a wild adventure. One of my favorites of yours! Great job, Claire!
This is a great start to an excellent story. You have to expand on it. I mean, who doesn't like a good portal, or time travel story? Please, just let your mind wander and add to it.
Excellent and gripping. I want to know where they ended up on the other side. The description of the book reminded me of the Voynich Manuscript. A great story, thank you!
A crusty old book, mysterious woods, and a hike to the abandoned castle
LOVE this! Watch out, Stranger Things!
This hooked me from the beginning and didn’t let go! The narration is really strong, and the dialogue and interactions between the two friends are perfect. I hope you come back to this someday because it feels like the beginning of a wild adventure. One of my favorites of yours! Great job, Claire!
This is a great start to an excellent story. You have to expand on it. I mean, who doesn't like a good portal, or time travel story? Please, just let your mind wander and add to it.
Excellent and gripping. I want to know where they ended up on the other side. The description of the book reminded me of the Voynich Manuscript. A great story, thank you!
That was excellent. I wasn't sure if you'd go dark or light, but either way, I want more.
Absolutely fantastic story, Claire! Even though it was longer than your usual, it was a quick, exciting read. Great job!
Your final paragraph!! Yes...what a strong way to end this story. Thank you for sharing it with us, Claire.