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LOVE this! Watch out, Stranger Things!

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This hooked me from the beginning and didn’t let go! The narration is really strong, and the dialogue and interactions between the two friends are perfect. I hope you come back to this someday because it feels like the beginning of a wild adventure. One of my favorites of yours! Great job, Claire!

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Feb 2, 2023Liked by Claire Walster

This is a great start to an excellent story. You have to expand on it. I mean, who doesn't like a good portal, or time travel story? Please, just let your mind wander and add to it.

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Feb 2, 2023Liked by Claire Walster

Excellent and gripping. I want to know where they ended up on the other side. The description of the book reminded me of the Voynich Manuscript. A great story, thank you!

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That was excellent. I wasn't sure if you'd go dark or light, but either way, I want more.

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Absolutely fantastic story, Claire! Even though it was longer than your usual, it was a quick, exciting read. Great job!

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Your final paragraph!! Yes...what a strong way to end this story. Thank you for sharing it with us, Claire.

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