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Vanessa Dias's avatar

It's an amazing story., Claire. There's an import message behind it... Great job!

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Claire Walster's avatar

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

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25's avatar

Good story. It's quite impressive that you wrote this with a room full of 13-year-olds.... and then dared to read it out loud. Nice!

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Claire Walster's avatar

It was a little intimidating, but it helps that I knew about half the class.

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Justin Deming's avatar

This is so much fun, Claire! Kudos to you - thirteen year olds can be a tough crowd! I love the story and hope you write part two.

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Claire Walster's avatar

The toughest! I'm glad you enjoyed this little tale, Justin!

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Claire Walster's avatar

That's a great point. I bet some would be pretty upset that their lives were forced to change.

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