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Fun read! I wonder if the townspeople would appreciate the freedom, though? The unknown can be scary.

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It's an amazing story., Claire. There's an import message behind it... Great job!

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Mar 31, 2023Liked by Claire Walster

Good story. It's quite impressive that you wrote this with a room full of 13-year-olds.... and then dared to read it out loud. Nice!

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This is so much fun, Claire! Kudos to you - thirteen year olds can be a tough crowd! I love the story and hope you write part two.

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