I enjoyed reading this. I love that you chose not to have the protagonist stealing cats with bad intentions. Also loved the absurdity of having aliens in it.
OMG! The aliens! I shouted, "What?!" and felt myself lean forward for the rest of the read. I am so curious about Sloane's next move! What a fun ride. Thank you for participating this month!
The addition of aliens into the mix really had me sitting up with surprise. I can imagine the black cat coming to rescue Sloane because cats are the only predators that the mice-like aliens fear, believing them to be the dominant life form on the planet... (which they, plot twist, are...).
I enjoyed reading this. I love that you chose not to have the protagonist stealing cats with bad intentions. Also loved the absurdity of having aliens in it.
Thanks for reading, Cody! It definitely got absurd near the end. Oh the joys of first draft fiction 😆
The mother of all twists at the end. I appreciate the Crazy-Cat-Lady angle, and the out-of-nowhere Aliens to cap it off hahaha. Well done!
Thanks, Scoot! This was a hard prompt for me to work through, so when I got stuck I just said Aliens!
Why didnt I think of that? 😂😂😂
This was unexpected haha loved the alien invasion!
Every story needs a good alien invasion now and again 😆
OMG! The aliens! I shouted, "What?!" and felt myself lean forward for the rest of the read. I am so curious about Sloane's next move! What a fun ride. Thank you for participating this month!
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Nicole! I'm excited to join in on more prompt celebrations in the future!
The addition of aliens into the mix really had me sitting up with surprise. I can imagine the black cat coming to rescue Sloane because cats are the only predators that the mice-like aliens fear, believing them to be the dominant life form on the planet... (which they, plot twist, are...).
Now that is a good idea! Thanks for reading!
This is hilarious. I love Sloane’s character -- sounds like the start of a great adventure tale where she saves cats across the galaxy.
Thanks for reading, Sara! I'm glad you enjoyed it. An intergalactic space mission for cats, with the help of aliens, now that's a fun idea.