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Bill Adler's avatar

A human bar owner in a town filled with supernatural beings. I love the idea and loved the Marv The Bartender.

Claire Chambers's avatar

Thanks so much, Bill! It's a fun concept for sure.

Clancy Steadwell's avatar

Okay apologies for any ignorance on my part if this is supposed to be readily apparent, but actually now I am thinking that maybe Marv and Loraine staged the whole thing (their kids are fine), and knowing their friends would intervene with a heavy hand, have now effectively eliminated all their competition. Even though Marv gave out drinks for free, pretty soon he is going to be the only bar in the neighborhood.

I guess all I'm saying is this might not be the feel-good everyone thinks!

Claire Chambers's avatar

I actually had this same thought as I was finishing up writing this story. It wasn't the intent at the beginning, but I don't think it's an incorrect way to view the story by the end. Thanks for reading and for you thoughtful comment!

Miriam Kresh's avatar

Great story!

Claire Chambers's avatar

Thanks for reading, Miriam!

Mark Starlin's avatar

Don’t mess with Marv, indeed.

Claire Chambers's avatar

Gotta protect him at all costs! Thanks for reading, Mark!

Jim Melvin's avatar

I loved this story! Loyalty among friends trumps all.

Claire Chambers's avatar

There is nothing quite like a loyal friend! Thanks for reading, Jim!

Petros Lefteris's avatar

Nice story, something different from the normal ones!

Claire Chambers's avatar

I'm glad you enjoyed it! This one was inspired by a Reddit writing prompt, which tend to bring out my more silly side I think. It's wild over there 😂

Amie McGraham's avatar

Gotta love reddit!

Claire Chambers's avatar

It's a love/hate relationship 😂

Osasuyi Ojomo's avatar

This was so wholesome 👏

Claire Chambers's avatar

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.