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Bill Adler's avatar

A human bar owner in a town filled with supernatural beings. I love the idea and loved the Marv The Bartender.

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Claire Walster's avatar

Thanks so much, Bill! It's a fun concept for sure.

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Clancy Steadwell's avatar

Okay apologies for any ignorance on my part if this is supposed to be readily apparent, but actually now I am thinking that maybe Marv and Loraine staged the whole thing (their kids are fine), and knowing their friends would intervene with a heavy hand, have now effectively eliminated all their competition. Even though Marv gave out drinks for free, pretty soon he is going to be the only bar in the neighborhood.

I guess all I'm saying is this might not be the feel-good everyone thinks!

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Claire Walster's avatar

I actually had this same thought as I was finishing up writing this story. It wasn't the intent at the beginning, but I don't think it's an incorrect way to view the story by the end. Thanks for reading and for you thoughtful comment!

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Miriam Kresh's avatar

Great story!

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Claire Walster's avatar

Thanks for reading, Miriam!

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Don’t mess with Marv, indeed.

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Claire Walster's avatar

Gotta protect him at all costs! Thanks for reading, Mark!

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Jim Melvin's avatar

I loved this story! Loyalty among friends trumps all.

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Claire Walster's avatar

There is nothing quite like a loyal friend! Thanks for reading, Jim!

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Petros Lefteris's avatar

Nice story, something different from the normal ones!

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Claire Walster's avatar

I'm glad you enjoyed it! This one was inspired by a Reddit writing prompt, which tend to bring out my more silly side I think. It's wild over there 😂

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Amie McGraham's avatar

Gotta love reddit!

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Claire Walster's avatar

It's a love/hate relationship 😂

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Osasuyi Ojomo's avatar

This was so wholesome 👏

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Claire Walster's avatar

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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